Could anyone please help me correcting this text?
Question by Bebê: Could anyone please help me correcting this text?
I’d like to know if this text is right. It’s for a resumé. (XXX = Name of the Company)
Objective
Human Resources
Education
? Jan/2009 – present – Post Graduation in People Management focusing Strategies– XXX – Expected Graduation Date – Jul/2010
? Dec/2008 – Psychology degree – UXXX
? Feb/2008 – Barchelor degree in Psychology – XXX
Languages Spoken
? English – advanced
? German – basic
? Spanish – basic
Professional Experience
? Jul/2005 – present – Self-employed – XXX – Receptionist at events
Development of several tasks on fairs ans other events, including customer reception, help at booths, translation services, among others.
? Aug/2002 – Aug/2003 – XXX – Researcher
Visiting pre-selected residences to apply questionaries about unemployment; make phone contact to residents to be interviewed.
? Dec/2001 – Feb/2002 – XXX – Retail Salesperson
Helping customers at the store and providing information about the store and products.
Experiences Abroad
? Nov/2005 – Jan/2006 – XXX – Orlando, FL – Receptionist/Park Greeter
Receiving guests at the park entrance; helping them on their arrival at the park; providing them with information; providing them with magical moments.
? Dec/2006 – Mar/2007 – XXX – San Francisco – CA – Cashier
Processing sales, receiving payment from customers and providing the change, operating cash register and scanner, cleaning and tidying the area and stocking any items that needed to be stocked.
? Dez/2006 – Mar/2007 – XXX – San Francisco, CA – Retail Salesperson
Selling clothing, lingerie and cosmetics, helping customers and providing them with information about the brand and products, stocking any items that needed to be stocked, cleaning and tidying the area.
Internship and Research Experience
? May/2008 -Sep/2009 – Human Resources – XXX
? Aug/2008 – Feb/2009 – Hospital Psychologist – XXX
? Oct/2008 – Nov/2008 – participation on “Studying Paddlers and Carters” research, focusing the analisys of the economical thinking development level of paddlers and carters
? Feb/2008 – Aug/2008 – Hospital Psychologist – XXX
? Sep/2007 – Jun/2008 – Clinical Psychologist/Infant Psychodiagnosis – XXX
? May/2005 – Dec/2005 – Therapeutic Companion to an autistic child in a kindergarten – XXX
Volunteer Experience
? Apr/2009 – Dec/2009: Junior Achievement – Adviser in Human Resources
Helping highschool kids to learn about the enterprising system.
Yes, thank you, I’m brazilian.
Best answer:
Answer by Erik Van Thienen
Dec/2006 – Mar/2007 – XXX – San Francisco, CA – Retail Salesperson
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